Looks good. I would dramatically shorten stem shifter housings, that would eliminate a lot of the clutter. Invest in a good set of cable cutters. Heck, even the Nashbar/Spin Doctor cutters are pretty decent, and often go on sale.
Check out the Schwinn catalogs or pictures on the web for guidance.
$14.99 with free shipping:
http://www.nashbar.com/bikes/Product...59_-1___202376