im sorry to be a stickler, it does sound better now. it sort of flows a bit more, no? another little thing that might just be my overanalyzation of a simple little phrase, but if you've already dreamt about the bikes isn't it true then that you've already "seen" them in some respects? i don't mean to knock the phrase and i'm sure it's just me that finds nitpicky little things like that. just throwing it out there.