The editing could have been better, as could have the filming. However, riding eight hours a day for four days straight, while shaking off hangovers, generally kills the ability to keep the camera steady.
I actually just ordered a crappy little one-chip camera off eBay to use just for transferring footage onto my PC; the IEEE jack on my VX1000 sh1t the bed on Sunday night.
As for the music, it wasn't my first choice, either. I wanted to use something by a local band, but nothing really fit well with the timing of the video.