Foo - the commuter

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ModoVincere
08-21-09, 05:52 AM
The commuter

The sun still hides
The air is so still
yet miles do I ride
up and over a big hill

moon lights my path
peacefully I do ride
a breeze at my back
over pavement I glide

rubber meets the road
burning in my thighs
my bike carries the load
the sun starts to rise

to the office I get
wasting so much time
a day full of bull****
and dreaming of my bike

Tude
08-21-09, 06:31 AM
Yours?

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/7/7c/Fhdhf.GIF
ModoVincere
08-21-09, 06:35 AM
Yours?

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/7/7c/Fhdhf.GIF

yes ma'am.

Tude
08-21-09, 06:43 AM
I like

http://www.psych.yorku.ca/pwaxer/images/TL2_CalvinNHobbsHug.gif
Holly
08-21-09, 07:05 AM
Yeah, MV, that's really nice :)
UnsafeAlpine
08-21-09, 07:07 AM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk77/UnsafeAlpine/applause.gif
Doohickie
08-21-09, 07:11 AM
http://mahopa.de/bilder/lustige-forenbilder/this-thread-rocks.jpg

Nice work, Modo
pgoat
08-21-09, 07:30 AM
:commute::beer::commute:
KingTermite
08-21-09, 09:33 AM
The rhyme worked up until last stanza.

time /rhyme with bike
KingTermite
08-21-09, 09:34 AM
The rhyme worked up until last stanza.

time /rhyme with bikeI take it back...path/back doesn't quite rhyme either. It's great then.

If it all rhymed and one didn't it sounds funny. If they are consistently inconsistent, then all is good, no expectations.


Good stuff! :thumb:
Airwick
08-21-09, 09:41 AM
The commuter

The sun still hides
The air is so still
yet miles do I ride
up and over a big hill

moon lights my path
peacefully I do ride
a breeze at my back
over pavement I glide

rubber meets the road
burning in my thighs
my bike carries the load
the sun starts to rise

to the office I get
wasting so much time
a day full of bull****
and dreaming of my bike

This talent hidden in our resident Foo pervert? I'm shocked, what gives? :)
Siu Blue Wind
08-21-09, 09:52 AM
MV this is a really cool poem - I really do like it. :)

It is indeed within your heart if you can write something like this rather than search on google. Thank you for sharing it with us. This is very awesome!! :thumb:
redirekib
08-21-09, 10:03 AM
I once saw a bike riding fred
Who pedaled more like he was dead
When I passed that dumb **** < feces
In his new postal kit
A decal fell off his Sram Red
HardyWeinberg
08-21-09, 10:31 AM
Totally wicked!!! (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=acYDNlMYAaI)
ModoVincere
08-21-09, 10:42 AM
Totally wicked!!! (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=acYDNlMYAaI)

loved that kid!:lol:
jsharr
08-21-09, 10:44 AM
Get on the sidewalk where you belong you hippie bastard.
cshell
08-21-09, 10:44 AM
http://communicationclinic.files.wordpress.com/2009/01/applause-2.jpg
couch_incident
08-21-09, 10:45 AM
There once was a man from Nantucket
His name was The Hillary.

Couch
Airwick
08-21-09, 11:06 AM
Get on the sidewalk where you belong you hippie bastard.

+1, you beatnik :) (commie beatnik at that)