Maybe it's the camera angle but your fork looks very vertical. The stem angle doesn't help with that appearance. It looks like you've got a light on the seatpost that's entirely blocked by the trunk bag. The saddle is really far back.
I can't quite make out what's going on with the bag in the front. Looks like a small front rack? In any event, it also looks like that huge bag is right on the tire. I don't like it.
Knobby tires are usually a deduction, but it looks like they've got some dirt on them so that could be a plus in this case.
I'm not a fan of the bars, but they kind of work with this setup.