Nice comments only pleeze
And tell me how to make it better
I don't know exactly what happened in it... Sound could have helped.
If you want to see some good stop motions (they're also claymations) go to www.newgrounds.com and look up a user called Knox, henry's shotgun and leroys dog one are my favorites.
Glass of water and Sniper time are really good too.
"the bus came by and I got on, that's when it all began...there was Cowboy Neal at the wheel of a bus to never-ever land."
Start with paper - write down a story line and what you want to happen. Story board it (create static images of the 'action' at various important points). Then do your animation. It will flow better and you can spend time on the timing of what you want to have happen. At this point it just seems like you took a bunch of pictures and hoped for the best, which isn't a bad thing starting off but your users will want to be lead to a story.