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    the commuter

    The commuter

    The sun still hides
    The air is so still
    yet miles do I ride
    up and over a big hill

    moon lights my path
    peacefully I do ride
    a breeze at my back
    over pavement I glide

    rubber meets the road
    burning in my thighs
    my bike carries the load
    the sun starts to rise

    to the office I get
    wasting so much time
    a day full of bull****
    and dreaming of my bike

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    Yours?


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    Quote Originally Posted by Tude View Post
    Yours?

    yes ma'am.

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    Yeah, MV, that's really nice
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    Nice work, Modo
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    People whose sig line does not include a jsharr quote annoy me.

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    The rhyme worked up until last stanza.

    time /rhyme with bike
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    - it's pretty well established that Hitler was an *******.

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    Quote Originally Posted by KingTermite View Post
    The rhyme worked up until last stanza.

    time /rhyme with bike
    I take it back...path/back doesn't quite rhyme either. It's great then.

    If it all rhymed and one didn't it sounds funny. If they are consistently inconsistent, then all is good, no expectations.


    Good stuff!
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    - it's pretty well established that Hitler was an *******.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ModoVincere View Post
    The commuter

    The sun still hides
    The air is so still
    yet miles do I ride
    up and over a big hill

    moon lights my path
    peacefully I do ride
    a breeze at my back
    over pavement I glide

    rubber meets the road
    burning in my thighs
    my bike carries the load
    the sun starts to rise

    to the office I get
    wasting so much time
    a day full of bull****
    and dreaming of my bike
    This talent hidden in our resident Foo pervert? I'm shocked, what gives?

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    MV this is a really cool poem - I really do like it.

    It is indeed within your heart if you can write something like this rather than search on google. Thank you for sharing it with us. This is very awesome!!
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    I once saw a bike riding fred
    Who pedaled more like he was dead
    When I passed that dumb **** < feces
    In his new postal kit
    A decal fell off his Sram Red
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    Quote Originally Posted by HardyWeinberg View Post
    loved that kid!

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    Get on the sidewalk where you belong you hippie bastard.
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    There once was a man from Nantucket
    His name was The Hillary.

    Couch
    Last edited by couch_incident; 08-21-09 at 10:50 AM.
    This thread needs more Chipcom!

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    Quote Originally Posted by jsharr View Post
    Get on the sidewalk where you belong you hippie bastard.
    +1, you beatnik (commie beatnik at that)
    Last edited by Airwick; 08-21-09 at 11:10 AM.

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