Mud, Gore & Guts
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: Bloomfield, NJ
Bikes: 2012 Van Dessel Gin & Trombones; 2011 Masi Speciale SSCX; '87 Peugeot Cannonball Express
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Too Flat. No sense of depth. Except, under the chin. That needs to be wider though. break up the rear wheel where the foot is to help this. Other places too.
Fine lines too fine. you'll probably have a hard time printing the finest lines. Rework the area between the front leg and wheel, helmet, under the chin, and teeth.
Font choice is too white-bread for what you are trying to say. +1 Looigi
The guy looks like he's crying in pain, not grimacing from the effort.
needs a tail-ectomy.
negative space in wheels is too large. Find a way to break it up
Head is pretty cool (with minor rework) but you need to work on the hands & feet to have a similar feel to it. Perhaps fillet corners like you did with the nose & chin.
Good luck. With some work, it'll get there.
Oh. and you're fork's bent and it's not a drive-side picture...