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    Senior Member Santaria's Avatar
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    [Removed at Sloppy Robots request]

    Nothing to see here, let it drop away into the neither world of posts.
    Last edited by Santaria; 09-13-05 at 06:44 PM.

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    oh god please no more haiku

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    bah, I'm bored at work, wanted something to challenge the mind. But, as you wish. Haiku be gone!

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    what kind of haiku is 2-6-2?

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    ok, nevermind.

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    i walked
    but i did not speak up.
    i fell........................................................

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    Ok, i resubmit my question.
    Haikus are 5-7-5.
    What's this 2-6-2 business?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Santaria
    [Removed at Sloppy Robots request]

    Nothing to see here, let it drop away into the neither world of posts.
    now thats what im talking about... is everyone paying attention to whats happening here?

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    i dont
    i know what im doing
    i do.

    i have no idea . im confused though.

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    perhaps these haiku
    were translated just this Fall
    from another tongue?

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    5-7-5 syllables...
    17 syllables for the total verse.

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    It was a work in motion, not complete. So it was in an odd form still, but I thought I'd build it in a running thread to do something different. Alas...

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    I prefer Tanka - 5/7/5/7/7 for a total of 31 syllables.

    I ride my fixie
    Pleasant early autumn night
    Leaves rustle and talk

    Streetlights shine on empty roads
    Nobody knows this but me

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    Hey, I like that Tanka...


    Fugazi, great band...

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    Just five syllables?
    How can that make sense to you?
    Screw this dumb nonsense!
    "Riding bikes on the street is the fuggin jam!" Juvi-Kyle

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