Old 05-27-13, 08:40 PM
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Originally Posted by TromboneAl
I'd put the second photo first. In fact, I'd ditch all the other photos, since the big red rim makes it seem like a decoration or a toy. You might add some closeups of the components, or something that shows off the nice paint. Should you make the loop in the cable for the rear brake smaller?

Here's the photo sharpened up:



Here's some copy:

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Man. That's^^^^^ good copy! Hope you don't mind if I copy and paste? Some good advice from all you guys, thanks.

I thought about buying a parts bike and putting it back to a road bike configuration, too, but jeez, I've already got three road bikes, so? But not a yellow one!
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