From what I can see, you laced the DS spokes the opposite of how the NDS is laced. Your NDS has trailing spokes elbows out, which is good for 'rejecting' the chain from getting stuck on the DS. However, your leading spokes are elbows out on the DS which is the opposite of what I recall being suggested. You could probably just unlace the DS and swap the elbow orientation to correct it, or just start from scratch.