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Old 10-16-07, 07:26 AM
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Originally Posted by Allister
This is a condensed version of the second paragraph, saying exactly the same thing:



I have only deleted words.

I can't find a superfluous word in the first.
You deleted too many... the definition of a stripe in the end has lost its reference.
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