Old 02-28-08 | 01:33 PM
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Originally Posted by Poguemahone
I laughed at the seatpost on the superhero guy's bike. I like little touches like that.
Must be mid period, grotesque Gould you like... don't see much of the early stuff in your art. Kochalka I pick up.
I don't know where you intend to go with this strip, or what you're aiming for. If you want a primarily cyclist audience, I think you're doing a great job. If you want to expand, you'll need a bit more emphasis on characterization. I think the characters will develop a bit more, given time, and I would imagine you'll eventually introduce a couple more regular characters. This will serve to flesh out the two main ones, just seeing them interact with more folks.
One thing I notice is that adversarial characters at this point (the councilman, the roadie) are a bit on the straw man side.
It's a comic strip, not a Ken Burns documentary on PBS.
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