just published this in my college newspaper, thought I'd share..
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At least he did not overuse exclamation marks. That is a sure sign of someone who does not have a decent argument, but thinks that speaking more emphatically will be convincing.
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Yea, plus his writing is awful - it's a favor to let him know. Unfortunately, in the more recent thread he started https://www.bikeforums.net/showthread...child-s-safety, he showed he didn't learn anything or try to improve his writing. And, it seems his ideas have degenerated as well.
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First error is generalizing all motorists with having "feeble thought" in the matter. I'm a biker and a motorist, and that automatically sounds like an attack to me, intentional or not. Not good.
Second, the wording is inconsistent. First half, like some have pointed out, have somewhat flamboyant writing. The last paragraph ends more like a personal rant without supporting fact. Anecdotal evidence shouldn't be used alone to support a far-reaching conclusion.
In the end, you make cyclists seem like rebels who are as spiteful toward motorists as they are to us as you claim in an overdrawn rant.
Second, the wording is inconsistent. First half, like some have pointed out, have somewhat flamboyant writing. The last paragraph ends more like a personal rant without supporting fact. Anecdotal evidence shouldn't be used alone to support a far-reaching conclusion.
In the end, you make cyclists seem like rebels who are as spiteful toward motorists as they are to us as you claim in an overdrawn rant.
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I stopped reading after the first sentence. Sounded too much like a "Frasier" episode.
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