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Old 03-27-07, 03:04 PM
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I need help for school

We have to do some 1000 word pursuasive essay. We picked out our own topics and mine is "Why bmx bikes should be allowed in all skateparks". I know there some sites out there on bikes in skateparks but I have not found to many yet. If any body knows any sites or anything about this please help. its like a 1/4 of our grade.

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Old 03-27-07, 04:55 PM
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the essay won't be very good if you spell in it like you do here...

just my $.02
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Old 03-27-07, 05:02 PM
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thats what spell check is for
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Old 03-27-07, 05:05 PM
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...and education!
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Old 03-27-07, 05:22 PM
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Well heres a video to how some people took action about no bikes being aloowed in skateparks.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InEIjKTw244

My comp is being stupid and wont let me make a link so just coby paste that into the web browser.
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theres a video about it, i think albes or dans sells it, and the video has a website dedicated to it, i think its called "break in" or somthing along those lines
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That's hella easy. I could finish that in 20 minutes. Send me money and i'll write it for you.
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Well, it's supposed to persuade us.

Why don't you start by telling US why BMX bikes should be allowed at all skateparks.

Pretend we're all mean grouchy evil people, who hate people with BMX bikes. If you're good enough at persuading, your essay may write itself.

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east hill to the rescue as usual
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Originally Posted by mude
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You know if you can convince me, you can convince anyone .

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All I got so far is that bikes will get parks more money, give kids a place to go, and bikes don't tear up ramps any more than skateboards do. I'd go in to more detail, but I only feel like writing the essay once.
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I need more sources though, I got a couple but the teacher wants us to have 7 sources total. I only have like 2...
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try the reference section of your local (not school) library. do a periodical search...ask the librarian for help.
Some college libraries are a better source
try to avoid the internet if you can...teacher's love when a student uses other sources (My senior project advisor HATED internet sources...but I needed to use one for the "duck and cover" video w/Bert the Turtle here)
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Once again...i could write pages upon pages on this subject. Just give me money.
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Originally Posted by mott464
I need more sources though, I got a couple but the teacher wants us to have 7 sources total. I only have like 2...
You know, didn't we go through this before--not with you mott464, but someone else? Perhaps I'm remembering something in Foo...about needing sources, but the sources couldn't be used for some reason because they weren't considered sources. Was that confusing? I think it was. I think I'll go do some research.

In the meantime, if you write the essay here, we can critique it for you, and ensure that you get an excellent grade. It will also have correct grammar, and correct spelling.

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dharam, does you shop sell chainbreakers, and willing to mail them at a low price?
i'd rather buy it from you then a random online compnay
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