[Removed at Sloppy Robots request]

Nothing to see here, let it drop away into the neither world of posts.

oh god please no more haiku

bah, I'm bored at work, wanted something to challenge the mind. But, as you wish. Haiku be gone!

what kind of haiku is 2-6-2?

ok, nevermind.

i walked
but i did not speak up.
i fell........................................................

Ok, i resubmit my question.
Haikus are 5-7-5.
What's this 2-6-2 business?

now thats what im talking about... is everyone paying attention to whats happening here?

i dont
i know what im doing
i do.

i have no idea . im confused though.

perhaps these haiku
were translated just this Fall
from another tongue?

5-7-5 syllables...
17 syllables for the total verse.

It was a work in motion, not complete. So it was in an odd form still, but I thought I'd build it in a running thread to do something different. Alas...

I prefer Tanka - 5/7/5/7/7 for a total of 31 syllables.

I ride my fixie
Pleasant early autumn night
Leaves rustle and talk

Streetlights shine on empty roads
Nobody knows this but me

Hey, I like that Tanka...


Fugazi, great band...

Just five syllables?
How can that make sense to you?
Screw this dumb nonsense!