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TimArchy 03-19-07 03:42 PM

The Touch
 
They roll up behind me at the light. Really close. I can feel the heat from their engine.
The instant the green comes they start forward, getting even closer as I accelerate through the crosswalk. I can feel impatience radiating through their glass and steel box. I can hear frustration in the rev of their engine.
A honk. And another.
I can hear them yelling now. Window down, bird flying.
Traffic clears and they fly around, dropping obscenities in their wake, barely bothering to clear my front tire as they swerve in front...
The traffic comes again. Tail lights flair red.
I roll slowly past them and on though the sea of cars.
My fingers brush lightly down the hood of their car.
A simple, harmless touch.
The meaning whispered yet clear.
I own you.

antiguru 03-19-07 04:08 PM

i cried

shark! 03-19-07 04:12 PM

this thread FTW

joshuastar 03-19-07 04:28 PM

touching.

i can picture it with the downtown
backdrop at night.

jotog 03-19-07 04:47 PM

You touched me softly with your words.
They are definitely in.
You, however, are absolutely ON.
Ride on, Timarchy

roadfix 03-19-07 04:55 PM

Cyclists touch me if get too close to them.

goldener 03-19-07 04:59 PM

He's got the Midas touch but he touched it too much
Hey goldmember! Hey goldmember!

edit: and i just peed and pood a little

estratton 03-19-07 05:13 PM

nice +++

mander 03-19-07 05:40 PM

Beautiful.

scott77 03-19-07 05:40 PM

wow i'm so hard now

cosmo starr 03-19-07 06:12 PM

chic

babychris 03-19-07 06:30 PM

a single tear ran down my face.

jamey 03-19-07 06:47 PM

that made me go #3...in my pants.

estratton 03-19-07 07:18 PM


Originally Posted by jamey
that made me go #3...in my pants.

**********

teiaperigosa 03-19-07 07:26 PM

yeaaaaaa...booiiiieeeeeeeeeee

the touch...nice

blickblocks 03-19-07 07:55 PM


Originally Posted by scott77
wow i'm so hard now

I am too. Fancy a ****?

jamey 03-19-07 07:57 PM


Originally Posted by estratton
**********

1+2=3...diarrhea

deathhare 03-19-07 08:02 PM

get outta the damn road! http://mk1love.com/forums/images/smilies/bump.gif

skelly 03-19-07 08:32 PM

Beautiful.

megatron 03-19-07 08:48 PM

wouldnt have happened if you had a brake.

scott77 03-19-07 09:08 PM


Originally Posted by megatron
wouldnt have happened if you had a brake.

+1bajillions

pitboss 03-19-07 09:15 PM


Originally Posted by megatron
wouldnt have happened if you had a brake.

or if he was in a car.
anyways...


nicely written, TimArchy.

jacobpriest 03-19-07 09:18 PM


Originally Posted by megatron
wouldnt have happened if you had a brake.

or a break. KNOW WHAT I MEAN?

ms.gio 03-19-07 09:26 PM

I can actually picture the scene. Good use of imagery.

soyboy 03-19-07 10:29 PM

it's pretty but i have to say the first thing i thought when you wrote about all the honking is that you don't know how to ride in traffic, remember sharing the road is a two way street(pun intended). that being said i know exactly what you're talking about and think you wrote beautifully about it


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