Haiku
09-13-05, 06:39 PM
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[Removed at Sloppy Robots request]
Nothing to see here, let it drop away into the neither world of posts.
Nothing to see here, let it drop away into the neither world of posts.
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09-13-05, 06:43 PM
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bah, I'm bored at work, wanted something to challenge the mind. But, as you wish. Haiku be gone!
09-13-05, 06:47 PM
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i walked
but i did not speak up.
i fell........................................................
but i did not speak up.
i fell........................................................
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Ok, i resubmit my question.
Haikus are 5-7-5.
What's this 2-6-2 business?
Haikus are 5-7-5.
What's this 2-6-2 business?
09-13-05, 07:12 PM
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like, really sloppy
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Originally Posted by Santaria
[Removed at Sloppy Robots request]
Nothing to see here, let it drop away into the neither world of posts.
Nothing to see here, let it drop away into the neither world of posts.
09-13-05, 07:14 PM
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i dont
i know what im doing
i do.
i have no idea . im confused though.
i know what im doing
i do.
i have no idea . im confused though.
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It was a work in motion, not complete. So it was in an odd form still, but I thought I'd build it in a running thread to do something different. Alas...
09-13-05, 07:54 PM
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I prefer Tanka - 5/7/5/7/7 for a total of 31 syllables.
I ride my fixie
Pleasant early autumn night
Leaves rustle and talk
Streetlights shine on empty roads
Nobody knows this but me
I ride my fixie
Pleasant early autumn night
Leaves rustle and talk
Streetlights shine on empty roads
Nobody knows this but me
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Just five syllables?
How can that make sense to you?
Screw this dumb nonsense!
How can that make sense to you?
Screw this dumb nonsense!
