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09-13-05 | 06:39 PM

Santaria

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Nothing to see here, let it drop away into the neither world of posts.

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09-13-05 | 06:42 PM

sloppy robot

like, really sloppy

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oh god please no more haiku

09-13-05 | 06:43 PM

Santaria

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bah, I'm bored at work, wanted something to challenge the mind. But, as you wish. Haiku be gone!

09-13-05 | 06:44 PM

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what kind of haiku is 2-6-2?

09-13-05 | 06:45 PM

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ok, nevermind.

09-13-05 | 06:47 PM

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i walked
but i did not speak up.
i fell........................................................

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09-13-05 | 06:52 PM

hyperRevue

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Ok, i resubmit my question.
Haikus are 5-7-5.
What's this 2-6-2 business?

09-13-05 | 07:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Santaria

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Nothing to see here, let it drop away into the neither world of posts.

now thats what im talking about... is everyone paying attention to whats happening here?

09-13-05 | 07:14 PM

Jamtastic

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i dont
i know what im doing
i do.

i have no idea . im confused though.

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09-13-05 | 07:18 PM

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perhaps these haiku
were translated just this Fall
from another tongue?

09-13-05 | 07:24 PM

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5-7-5 syllables...
17 syllables for the total verse.

09-13-05 | 07:27 PM

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It was a work in motion, not complete. So it was in an odd form still, but I thought I'd build it in a running thread to do something different. Alas...

09-13-05 | 07:54 PM

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I prefer Tanka - 5/7/5/7/7 for a total of 31 syllables.

I ride my fixie
Pleasant early autumn night
Leaves rustle and talk

Streetlights shine on empty roads
Nobody knows this but me

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