Originally Posted by
skiffrun
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Can you re-write the above so that it is comprehensible?
Leave out the extraneous stuff.
E.g., the north end has nothing to do with getting to getting the south end.
Use paragraphs of related sentences -- not just one long jibber-jabber.
Sentences should be trying to make one single point.
Perhaps generally outline the time-frame. And then augment with just enough pertinent detail to explain your question.
E.g., you arrive New Orleans May 8. Tour orientation is May-10, 3:30 pm at the airport (in New Orleans ?).
The tour starts __where__ ? The sign, the airport, in a field?
A hired limo may cost less than a taxi.
OK, how is this: I need to get from the New Orleans Hilton Airport Hotel with my bicycle on the morning of Sunday, May 9th, to the Southern Terminus of LA Rt. 23, approximately 90 miles. The only alternative I have come up with to date is a taxi but I am asking for suggestions of other alternatives.