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Old 04-25-11, 04:16 PM
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Fixation is a true life documentary focusing on the thrilling world of single speed cycling. Shot over the course of 12 weeks, Fixation captures, for the first time, the excitement and popularity of this growing sport from all perspectives.
Did you shoot anywhere else besides Southern California?

If not, then don't be so ambitious. To properly set the audience's expectations, just rewrite that as:

Fixation is a true life documentary focusing on the thrilling world of single speed cycling in Southern California. Shot over the course of 12 weeks, Fixation captures, for the first time, the excitement and popularity of this growing sport from all perspectives in Southern California.
It's cool that you got Jamie Staff to do an interview. He's a nice guy.
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