George, what do you mean by "everything"? Is that everything necessary for camping or is that everything needed if you decide to stop and play around of golf or does "everything" include the kitchen sink? It could ya know! I find the word "everything" a bit ambiguous. Could you change "everything" to, "my camping gear", I would like it better if you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,




Just messing with you George, I couldn't resist! What you have sounds good.