The area where the palm rests is angled too low, IMO. You want it to be horizontal, at the minimum, or angled up just a few degrees, with the bike sitting level. Use a piece of 1" or slightly larger dowel rod or pipe to span between the hoods, with the rod held firmly against the area where the crook of your thumb would rest. Then measure from the front of the bar to the near side of the rod to be sure both levers are mounted the same.

In practice, I've found that moving the band clamp up the hook as little as 5mm changes the angle from too-low to too-high. It's wise to tape the cables in place and take a test ride before installing bar tape.

The hook section of the bar may also be angled a little too extreme, presumably to get the area behind the brake hood to be nearly level. Some brands post a drawing of the bars, including what's usually called the rampdown angle. Most are built to have that are behind the brake hood angled down a bit. Newer bars may be as little as 3 degrees, while old styles might be as much as 10-15 degrees. Use that test ride to evaluate the angle of the hooks. I always set that first, then try to ge the hoods properly adjusted. I've bought bars with too much rampdown angle that just didn't work for me, so they were returned (without being used of course).