Oh, hey, no revision needed if you're really serious about this. I hope you can forgive me for thinking that you were making a joke, I mean, it strikes me as very unusual that someone so adept with a camera, up-to-date on LED emitters and lumens, would be riding a bike that barely looks functional or safe-- derailleur cables are slack, pads don't hit the rim squarely, and a crank arm that doesn't look securely seated-- at 30mph at minutes for a time in traffic with a flashlight tied to their helmet with a string. It's entirely possible that I don't get out and meet enough cyclists, but that someone would do those things and find that bike interesting struck-- and still strikes-- me as very odd, to the extent I figured it was a fun joke.

However, if you are being honest about these things, it's I who owe you an apology, not you who needs to make any revisions! So, sorry, man, and welcome to the forums!

Be careful riding that thing, too!