It is hard to critique someone else's list, in part because folks value different things. Also unless you are very specific on the individual items the same listed items might weigh 20 or 80 pounds. So I'll just make some general comments.

You really need very little. I personally minimize clothing, especially off bike clothing. I wouldn't duplicate any of your off bike clothing items and lately I have taken to using the same shirts on and off bike (running tech tees rather than jerseys). I consider a pair of running shorts the main off bike clothing item.

If you want to trim your list you might find my ultralight touring article useful.