Hey everyone!

So pretty recently I was assigned the assignment to write a paper about freedom. At the time when I got the assignment I thought, ok I could maybe write about the berlin wall. But later I was speaking with a friend who helps me with papers and he said "Stop for a second, yes you can write about something that everyone else will write about or you can write about something you personally love" So after thinking about it for a second I thought. Huh, what about cycling?

So I went through the whole process of interviewing some people, and I also got some studies to help me along.

Below is the actual paper. The reason I am posting this is a) to see peoples responses and what they thought and b) because I think that there are people on this board who can really relate to this. So here it is:
(For everyone, if you want the paper you need to send me a PM and I will give it to you)
Thoughts?

(Just a side note, if you are having a problem with reading the paper, please tell me and I can figure out a way to get it to you. thanks)