Originally Posted by evanyc
there is such thing as sucking the life out of someting. that's what this article does. good analytical writing can examine something while allowing it to remain vibrant and lively. really good analytical writing enhances the liveliness of what it is analyzing. this just sucks the life out of it.
sorry...this IS good writing
the problem with good writing is that the functionally illiterate are often unable to appreciate it and often knock it because they are unable to do so.
what does this suck the life out of? I felt that the entry exuded vibrance, liveliness and an emotionally affected perception of the author's experience.
now I actually read the whole blog entry, and it is not even overanalytical...****, it's not even really analytical...'s descriptive of an experience, and a perspective...