Originally Posted by BroMax
The split infinitive in your critique is a good start.
the rule--or rather, tradition--against split infinitives is silly, pointless, and ill-conceived. the latin infinitive is one word and can't be split. the english infinitive, though, is two. for god knows what reason, we saw that the romans
couldn't split their infinitives, and decided we
shouldn't split ours.
**** that grammar rule, i say.