Originally Posted by
theril
I am looking for some advice, and not quite sure on the best location to post. I apologize in advance to those that see this through the cross posts…
I am currently participating in a writing class, and have ridden for a while (blessedly) free of major injuries. The story I am developing focuses on a character that suffers a major accident during a mountain bike race (set in Colorado) – enough that he is told he “will/should never competitively ride again”.
Here is my question. What type of injury, or combination of injuries, would be enough to make a doctor reach that type of conclusion? The rider should still be able to recover (over time, with rehab, etc.)… My original thought was some form of back injury, where part of the spine would need to be fused … does this seem feasible, or are there any other suggestions?
I like some kind of head injury, maybe a severe concussion, because the effects of those are cumulative. A person could function normally, but it would be dangerous to risk further injury. Happens to football players all the time.
FWIW, I've made my living as a writer for 35 years, and I'd advise you to avoid constructions like "currently participating in." No editor is going to buy that. Just say, "I'm taking..." And it's "a character WHO," not "a character THAT."
I know that sounds picky, but I've been both a writer selling stories and an editor buying them, and that kind of stuff will have your manuscripts coming back every time.