Old 02-24-08 | 06:46 PM
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Very nice.
I've always had trouble with the comic strip format-- far too limiting in visual terms for me. And the joke a day format is so damn limiting in narrative terms. Ah, for the days of the extended narrative strip. You're working well within what I consider a formal striaghtjacket.
Your line has a nice clarity; reminds me a bit of Seth; although your figures don't have his grace (sorry; although I find his work stilted, he does draw the figure quite well. On the other hand, your drawing lacks that very stilted quality. Overall, I might like it more). But you've achieved a nice, brushy line that gives some hint of weight and movement.
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