I like the modifications, but maybe I should have clarified exactly what I did a little more.
The glyphs in the file I made are spaced so that they exactly match the spacing of the ones on the bike (measured with digital calipers). Also, I can't see any thickness improprieties when I compare with my trace paper overlay.
So, as it is, it's pretty close to the originals - at least good enough for the average retrogrouch restorer. Just the aforementioned hyphen needs tweaking. And an .ai export (can't imagine why the corners are disconnected...). So as for "look more like it": -- as nicely as I can put it -- not at all
With this in digital format though, everyone can tweak to their hearts content. I'm anxious to see what else others will do with it -- I know I won't be keeping mine spot on orignal, at least a touch of exotic color will be needed
Pinstripe paths (or at least, the crowns of them and good descptions of the straight line geometries and dimensions), outline paths of the reynolds decals (for proper replacement positioning) coming up next.