I have a critique - by only listing your build parts and not posting a picture you are encouraging the alarming fetishization of this subforum. You expect everyone to know all of those parts, what they look like, and then mentally conceive what the bicycle looks like.

This is a seemingly endemic problem of this subforum. People become obsessed with their bicycles and parts and don't actually ride the bike enough or that far.

I have no problem looking at a built bicycle and offering an opinion, but it is rather odd to just post parts and expect an evaluation. There, you have my critique.