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Old 01-19-05 | 07:26 AM
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Originally Posted by foehn
Nice job at the constructive critique.

Gigantic quasi-"stream of thought" paragraphs annoy me too.
Thanks for the suggestions. As an English major and a semi-professional writer and editor, the post was technically accurate and in accordance with the properties of the English language. Paragraphs were unnecessary as the sentences remained inter-related and did not vary from the theme. I agree that in forum posts, the appearance is less appealing than in literary form. I wouldn't refer to my post as 'Giantic quasi-"stream of thought" as correct punctuation and grammar were employed and it was not excessive in length. However, with literary license being what it is today, there may be many effective techniques utilized to accurately express one's thoughts. I do appreciate your comments though. Sincerely.

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