Originally Posted by
PedallingATX
you said "Boredom is the worst state for a human being to find himself in." That is a statement, a complete thought, a sentence. One that violates everything else you say. You don't say anything about it being your own personal opinion into later in the paragraph. IMO and "That's just me though" apply to your third sentence only. If you wanted to qualify that statement you would have had to tack a qualifier onto the beginning or end of it...understand?
You can't possibly not understand the basic structure of a paragraph.
"A paragraph (from the Greek paragraphos, "to write beside" or "written beside") is a self-contained unit of a discourse in writing dealing with a particular point or idea."
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paragraph
At this point you're just being willfully stupid. I've got better things to do, so I'm off to go do them
