Drunken Haiku
09-28-05, 05:03 PM
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Love me some Crown...
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Sweet sweet Crown Royal
Your Golden beauty soothes me
Pour me another.
Your Golden beauty soothes me
Pour me another.
09-29-05, 03:20 PM
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Beausage is Beautiful
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Thread-divergent tanka:
Passing drunken bars
Cold air sober spinning fast
Blackness underneath
The clarity of the chill
The energy of the ride
Passing drunken bars
Cold air sober spinning fast
Blackness underneath
The clarity of the chill
The energy of the ride
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11-05-05, 09:56 PM
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Beausage is Beautiful
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Right-of-way stolen
Panic stop to miss the car
Skid between raindrops
Panic stop to miss the car
Skid between raindrops
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11-05-05, 09:59 PM
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Ferrous wheel
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Pant leg caught in chain
No drink to soften the hurt
Down I go again.
No drink to soften the hurt
Down I go again.
11-05-05, 11:18 PM
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Originally Posted by Smorgasgeorge
God bless Hurricane.
Best damn malt liquor ever.
Three for five dollars.
Best damn malt liquor ever.
Three for five dollars.
that two dollar pick me up
thats chuck full of booze
12-17-05, 12:56 PM
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18 dog baby
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bump, *****, bump me...
booty skank with your Giant
we'll draft through jar heads
booty skank with your Giant
we'll draft through jar heads
12-17-05, 12:58 PM
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Originally Posted by 2mtr
bump, *****, bump me...
booty skank with your Giant
we'll draft through jar heads
booty skank with your Giant
we'll draft through jar heads
that was, apparently an epithet, which was stared out. but it was germaine and full of meaning and rhetorical necessity. blast and drat!
12-17-05, 07:49 PM
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live free or die trying
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Originally Posted by Fugazi Dave
Right-of-way stolen
Panic stop to miss the car
Skid between raindrops
Panic stop to miss the car
Skid between raindrops
i'm too sober to add haiku. maybe i should have some of what smorgasgeorge was talking about (which is cheaper here, btw).
12-17-05, 08:01 PM
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A lot of time, I find that the best haiku come when I am specifically as sober and clear as can be. It is the clarity of mind that poetry chooses to emerge from sometimes.
Tonight's haiku:
Coal-dust night so still
The moon just a ghost above
Cold air teases skin
Tonight's haiku:
Coal-dust night so still
The moon just a ghost above
Cold air teases skin
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12-17-05, 08:19 PM
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live free or die trying
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hmmm...i feel that way sometimes when i'm writing songs. like i have to find a way of arranging words that says what i want to say, says in an interesting way, hopefully uses some vivid imagery, while sounding musical with or without music to it. other poetry i need sobriety to write and formulate the way it'll look on the page.
in the context of the haiku on this page however...maybe i should have been more specific. i suck at haiku in any state, but drunk, it would be funnier. when drunk, i often put a lot more raw emotion into other forms of writing, too...but it has to be refined sober.
i think it was oscar wilde who said that all good writing is either written drunk and edited sober or vice versa. not totally true...but look at hemingway, faulkner, et al.
in the context of the haiku on this page however...maybe i should have been more specific. i suck at haiku in any state, but drunk, it would be funnier. when drunk, i often put a lot more raw emotion into other forms of writing, too...but it has to be refined sober.
i think it was oscar wilde who said that all good writing is either written drunk and edited sober or vice versa. not totally true...but look at hemingway, faulkner, et al.
12-18-05, 12:33 AM
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PINK THUNDER
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Vicodin feels good.
Got myself home just fine, thanks.
Lemme have another.
Got myself home just fine, thanks.
Lemme have another.
12-18-05, 12:35 AM
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Chainring tore my jeans
today. Again. Fückin' A.
Needle & thread. GO!
today. Again. Fückin' A.
Needle & thread. GO!
12-18-05, 01:59 AM
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No sleep comes as yet
Long day, long year, still grinding
No sleep before death
Long day, long year, still grinding
No sleep before death
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12-18-05, 02:12 AM
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consistent inconsistency
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i got "****ed up" once
hit a big ****in' BRICKWALL
wore my ****in' lid
(i'm not creative so i had to resort to "****" a lot.)
hit a big ****in' BRICKWALL
wore my ****in' lid
(i'm not creative so i had to resort to "****" a lot.)
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