Originally Posted by
hockeyteeth
Yeah, that was bad. I quickly edited the intro, haha:
Originally Posted by lame-ass wiki article The car-free movement is composed largely of people who believe that the automobile (and especially private car ownership) has an overall negative impact on people and the planet. However, many people are also car-free by less pretentious motives, including: necessity (legal or financial), environmental concern, frugality, etc.
Your edit attempted to correct one misconception, but your use of the word "pretentious" also expresses an opinion. To make the article better, it should be fact-based rather than opinion-based.